This sounds like an interesting story about how someone finally makes it out of that dark place, but gets sucked back in again. I don't think this adds enough Film Noir into the story because all I see is fragility and entrapment within the boy. I think these are really important characteristics though because it really creates texture for the character and it shows a lot about his past and how he's changed. The story seems to flow really well becaus eit starts with a little look at his daily life, then it goes to the girl calling, which turns the whole story around, andthen it ends in a climactic eventI like the closing shot though because it shows the significance of the title. I think there's a really great story and message behind this, so it should turn out really great. I think the complications for this piece may be finding all of the people to surround the fight. Also, it's difficult to get a classroom full of people. Maybe yoou could just get a few people in one spot of the classroom and only show that spot so it seems like the classroom is full.
?- Ash R., Christian P., Dee C., and Gabe V.
I think this shows great examples of entrapment because of when the man is confined. I think this story really captures the whole"stalker" concept, but its interesting how its the women instead. I think the opening shots really set the main idea of "womanizing" in motion. I like how the man seems innocent, but then it slowly builds up to revealing his guilt. I think this story shows femme fatale, which really adds quality to the piece. Challenges may be finding a restaurant that will allow you to film and use violence. Also, it's not so great when a weapon is used, so you may want to use a fake one. Other than that, the story seems relatively flawless.
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